Written by one of my reading students. I want to share.

Written by Charli
First Grader (second/third grade reading level class)

4-29-14
Title:
You Could Visit Detroit Now or Today
Detroit is a great place to be. Detroit has alot of musi. There are raping music love music church music. Detroit has alot of seasions. There are four seasions. I can even name them all. There are fall winter spring and summer. I love Detroit if they have all of the storms that happen. But I will alway love, care and like Detroit. I thinck I will always stay in Detroit. Detroit will always be my favoritest place in the world. I know Detroit can change but Detroit doesn't have to change. Detroit can make it's own decisions. I thinck that Detroit is already wunderful and lovelyier than anything. I want to clean up the earth.



Bordering says: "Welcome to Detroit everyone." The little girl is waving and saying, "Hello Detroit"